What's the plot?
In the walled city of Aramanth, families' social positions are governed by endless tests and an oppressive fixation on striving for more. But rebellious young Kestrel has had enough. She leads her brother Bowman and unlikely companion Mumpo on a deathly odessey that will take first them, then all of Aramanth, across the world in search for freedom.
Where's it from?
The first of the books came out in the year 2000, and there's a certain old-school sensibility to the story that marks it out as non-American even before I found out that Mr Nicholson is indeed British.
The vibe in three words: Tense, thought-provoking, adventurous
Re-readable? Maybe not often, but definitely worth revisiting.
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It's the very early 2010s, and we're sitting on the mat as our stern and quirky teacher reads from a book with an S-shaped amulet on the cover, half-buried in red sand.
There's funny catchphrases - "Pompaprune! Sagahog!". There's a colourful city with a grey-clad underclass, orange-housed middle classes, scarlet suburbs of well-to-do, and white marble district of the powerful. There's an endless army of evil, a daring plunge into a flame-filled door - and that mystical musical contraption itself, the wind singer.
Fifteen-ish years later I happened across The Wind Singer in Arty Bee's, and was curious to relive those intermediate-school days. Somewhere along the way I'd also learned that it was part of a trilogy, and you know what that means - it was time to make some library requests from the stacks.
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The main thing that stuck in my mind from that original read was how the characters lived in constant fear of the tests that determined their family's fate.
In one of the opening chapters we see two-year old Pinpin being sat down in a hall to be quizzed on toddler-appropriate knowledge, a funny yet sinister scene that leads to family-wide anxiety about how Pinpin peeing on the examiner would damage their standing.
Kestrel's hatred of tests is the catalyst for the whole series' plot, when she flees with Bowman to escape the terrifying punishment for disobedience. Up till this point the story is classically dystopian - except for the fact that these twins have telepathy (now where have I seen that before?).
A mysterious figure entrusts Kestrel with a treasure map and the task of retrieving the wind singer's voice - that silver amulet from the cover - which will bring goodness back into the hearts of Aramanth. So far, so simple. Back home, the parents endure the injustices of a society that demands that they conform, and start a rebellion of their own.
The long walk to retrieve the MacGuffin could be a bog-standard middle-grade quest, but Nicholson knows how to keep the pace up and the tension high.
The unwanted loser Mumpo tags along with the twins, which creates some great dynamics, and the dangers on the way are genuinely frightening: a relentless pursuit of wrinkled 'old children' who suck the life from you with a touch; murderous warfaring tribes who can't listen to reason; a crumbling bridge over an impassable crevasse - oh, and the constant threat of starvation. I imagined that the kids were about twelve, but they're only ten - in the second book five years have passed and they're just 15, which makes the horrors of the first book even more disturbing.
At the same time, there's a quaint charm to the story that reminded me of Badjelly the Witch. There's helpful wolves and eagles, an immortal woman asleep in a well-appointed bedroom, and the warring desert tribes differentiate friend from foe by hairstlyes and are quite decent under all the posturing. It's a strange mix of genres, but it works; possibly because the dystopia-rebellion vibes are confined to the city while the epic magic quest takes place in the world beyond.
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Book two, though, takes the characters in a totally new and dark direction. It's my stand-out favourite of the three, and the most sophisticated.
The Wind Singer is a perfectly good stand-alone adventure, but Slaves of the Mastery is where things really get interesting. Right off the bat, now-peaceful Aramanth (and its precious wind singer) is burned to the ground by slavers from across the desert. Amongst the murder and destruction Kestrel evades capture and follows the slave march, vowing vengeance on the warrior-prince who led the attack. Talk about amping up the stakes!
Kestrel is a great heroine, full of passion and rage, and I love how she always achieves her aims through cleverness rather than physical force; she's a bit like Lyra in His Dark Materials. She talks her way into joining a travelling caravan and makes unexpected friends with a hilariously spoiled yet lonely princess who's on her way to marry the Mastery's warrior-prince. Kestrel also makes uneasy allies with the prideful leader of the caravan's soldiers, manipulating him into a cunning plot to free her people. It all culminates in an excellently action-packed third act full of dramatic irony and inner conflict.
I read in the author bio at the back of the book that William Nicholson was also a screenwriter on Gladiator, which makes total sense and definitely flavoured my imaginging of the world.
In Slaves of the Mastery, he takes a thought-provoking look at slavery and what makes a 'great' kingdom. The world feels a lot more real and fleshed out than the fantastical journey of The Wind Singer, and this instalation doesn't shy away from violence. Some of the most horrific scenes involve named characters being burned alive to scare the new slaves into obedience. It's a continuation of the themes from the previous book, just applied to a different form of societal control.
Personality-wise, Bowman is the opposite of his sister, and I appreciated having a boy main character who is deeply thoughtful, kind, and sensititve. The twins' connection and love for each other is truly the heart of the series. In this book, Bowman is apprenticed to the warrior-prince, and is disarmed by the prince's apparent goodness and his reverent loyalty to the Master who rules this beautiful kingdom. Bowman and his family try to convince the others of the need to escape, but the Mastery actually treats its slaves extremely well, and life there is almost happy. What is freedom, really? Is it worth dying for? Would you risk it all?
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The Wind on Fire takes us back to good old desert treks and commits to a magic plot again, but falls into cliche.
In book two Bowman started to develop some telekenisis powers to go with his telepathy, and has a classic mind-battle with the big bad "we're not so different, you and I" Master. The last book in the trilogy doubles down on that serious tone. It also does a weird thing I've noticed in other kids' books of the period where there'll be cut-away interludes to a distant side-plot, which tend to drag the pace down.
The majority of book three is about reaching the fabled homeland of the Manth people, with spine-tingling obstacles at every turn. Then Bowman has to go off for special chosen-one training. To be honest, I skimmed the book from there on, despite my fondness for the characters. Being taught to crush an egg with your mind and saving the world by simply believing in yourself is nowhere near as gripping as the down-to-earth plot that the blurb focused on - of Kestrel being taken by bandits and the twins' fight to find each other again (a thrilling but much-too-short setpiece).
One thing I did not like was the sudden random emphasis on everyone pairing up. What is this, Love Island?
In Slaves of the Mastery Kestrel feels like an outsider for not wanting to be married, which made her a nice foil to the child-bride princess. But later, her solitariness becomes her defining trait. In a scene where a prophet reveals everyone's futures, not only are all of them but Kestrel destined to marry each other, but multiple young girls are set up with older men, including Pinpin who for some reason has an all-consuming crush on ten-years-older Mumpo. (Mumpo meanwhile is forever in love with Kestrel, who has to apologise to him and feel guilty for not reciprocating. But hey guys, if you don't you get the girl you can always marry her baby sister!) It was a shame that an unnecessary romance rivalry gets in the way of Pinpin and Kestrel's sisterly relationship.
In the epilogue, the survivors are all very heteronormatively shacked up together in a kinda gross Deathly Hallows way, a disappointingly cliche end to an otherwise great series. I'm glad I didn't get to the third book when I was younger - Kestrel's "broken, wrong" singleness doesn't set a good example in a society that already holds up coupledom as the ultimate goal for girls.
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It is really satisfying to see how the characters change through the books.
Pitiful Mumpo evolves into a hardened fighter; a coddled friend becomes a scarred runaway; a cowherd was once an emperor; the powerful lose everything, allies turn to enemies, and traitors sacrifice themselves for others.
The last two books also move from focusing on Kestrel and Bowman to encompassing a much wider raft of characters. It did make the twins feel off to the side somewhat, but the community is very well-drawn and they all have fantastic names: Red Mimilith, Hanno Hath, Rufy Blesh, Ombaraka and Omchaka, the Zohanna of Gang.
I liked too the way things from previous books came up again, like the princess's wedding dress being used as a way-finding flag. However, there's more things that aren't ever returned to. What happened to the mud-dwellers underneath Aramanth when it was burned? What was the deal with those life-sucking old children who were sent after kids who refused to follow the rules?
It's also easy to see how The Wind Singer became a go-to school read, with its relatable anti-exams message.
As a kid reader it's all hell yeah, tests suck - but as an adult reader, it's clear the author's got meritocracy in mind. At one point the dad has a 'you wouldn't judge a fish on its ability to climb a tree' moment, while the order-obsessed leaders smugly monologue on the virtues of the system - what could be fairer than one exam for everyone? If you're in the slums, why, it must be because you're lazy and just need to work harder like us at the top. It's unpleasantly reminiscent of certain hateable politicians - which helps the book feel relevant today.
If you've read this far into the blog you'll be aware of the kind of books I gravitate towards, but fear not, dear reader - I am reading two adult fiction books at the moment. These reviews won't all be kids' fantasies!
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